First Person Who Laughs Gets a Fist Full'o'Something!!!

Something old for something new for something old...

Okay, I said I was thinking about posting poetry so here I go. This one I wrote a while back and I think its pretty good. I really dont care what u think though so whatever :) . It's in Filipino(tagalog) so I'm sorry for all of you international folks... if any. I promise to put some english ones up if I ever finish the drafts. Since there is no spell checker for my language that I'am aware of I must apologize for mishaps in the spelling department... never been a good speller. Mga kababayan enjoy... preetty please -.- ...


Kasalanang Hiling

Kasalanan pa bang humiling
diba't ibinigay mo na lahat sa akin

Ano pa ang hihingiin,
kakaylanganin, aakuin

Dapat bang makuntento ako
sa iyong hina-hain

Ang tanim na palay hayaang mabulok
aanuhin pa ba ang aanihin

Dapat bang di na ako humiling,
maghanap ng mas kaakit-akit sa akin

Wala na bang dapat hanapin
upang kompletuhin tong buhay bigay sa amin

Magnais, kagitingan, kasikatan,
kasayahan, kalayaan

Wala nang gantimpala
dapat pang akuin

Kasalanan pa bang humiling
nang ikay maintindihan namin

Dapat pa bang alalahanin, aming kaligtasan,
aming kaluluwang walang hangan

Iyong pangakong langit
dapat ko pa bang pilit abutin

Buong buhay ko ba'y naisulat na,
nakataga sa bato nang madiin